Score: 7

"Good..."

submission: journey of the darkness

date: November 7, 2006

The text sequences were nice, but it took absolutely forever. It had a really good intro that was nicely animated.

I recommend that you try and make your own animated ghost thing, and make the text appear and recede quicker, so i don't have to sit here and wait so long.

The idea was pretty good, and i don't think this is stolen from anyone, so i'll help it pass.

5/5

Score: 10

"HOW DO I???"

submission: Cursor Catalogue 2

date: October 22, 2006

Hey, if you can send me like whateva u used to make number 8. Can you send it to me in a form, where i can use that effect on my myspace or xanga? if you could tell me it would be really kool.

Other than that, that was amazing.

Score: 6

"Good but needs improvements"

submission: Mario the Gladiator II

date: October 20, 2006

This was a pretty good flash. You might want to work on autotiming the text, so viewers don't have to click as much. I'm not a flash expert so don't ask me, but i also thought that maybe you could try and make more realistic fire and lightning effects.

It has an original plot, even though it uses characters that have been used and overkilled many times over.

THis gets my 4.

Score: 4

"Worth a Chuckle"

submission: The Obnoxious Pumpkin

date: October 20, 2006

Its worth watching for a quick fix laugh. try and make ur fingers a little bit smaller though. Other than that, pretty good job.

Score: 7

"Incredible"

submission: War! ::: BIE

date: October 14, 2006

This was great man, i was wondering if this was gonna be a piece of shit, but it was amazing man. Keep animating. The first few parts were a bit weird, but after the first like 15 seconds... i was captivated. That was good animating, it might make the top few for today... who knows?

Also, i noticed that your guns were pretty realistic and commend you for that.

Score: 6

"Pretty Good"

submission: Cleanor Short

date: October 12, 2006

Hey i liked the concept and everything, but the sound was killing me.

Work on a different voicing, one that we can actually understand and hear clearly, and doesn't ruin the ears. If you like the voice, try and put in subtitles por favor, ok?

Score: 9

"I WANT MORE"

submission: Zombies of the Apocalypse

date: October 12, 2006

Nice flash, but i want more!!!!!!!!

Score: 7

"Hey, good but could get better"

submission: Border Patrol: Complete

date: October 9, 2006

try and make AP rounds cheaper, or get a way to get more money faster.

try and make a way to increase clip size. And to make the day look like it goes longer try and make a sun go across the sky.

Other than that, and the fact that it would seriously piss off a mexican, good work.

Score: 5

"A bit Hard"

submission: halloween clock game

date: October 6, 2006

THe timing that you had to hit the thing was kinda hard, but other than that, it was a pretty well made game.

I liked the preloader intro thing. WEll made. Good work.

You might want to make the background change, and you know, spruce it up a bit and make it look cooler. If you need tips just search for forums on the web, it always works.

Score: 4

"It would piss off a russian"

submission: History 101

date: October 6, 2006

Sure it might piss off a russian, but im Korean so i don't really care, lol.

Anyway, if that person was your own creationg, i would say keep on animating. Hitler was kinda weird without eyes though.... And of course, i still can't believe you didn't know that hitler was a martian. You should be ashamed of yourself.

I gave it a three, cause it wasn't the greatest, but not the worse.

Hope you keep animating if that person was your own creation.